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Sunday, August 16, 2009

'प्रतिभा'

'प्रतिभा'

वह शांत थी अनजान थी
और उससे भी अधिक गुमनाम थी
घनघोर अँधेरे में रोशनी का एक कतरा गया
उसे जगाया गया, सहलाया गया
पर संकोच की परतों में वह, ढंकी रही, छिपी रही
पहचान तो गयी खुद को, पर सबकी नजरों से बची रही
ठहर ठहर के उसे ललकारा और उभारा गया
आ दिखा जौहर अपना, कहकर उसे पुकारा गया
मान अटल इस पुकार को, कठिन साधना से निखरी
ओजस्वी उसका आत्मबल, किरणें जिसकी बिखरी
आखिर जम कर चमकी गगन में, नजरो में उसकी कौंध चुभी
वो तो नहाई रोशनी में, औरों को उसकी चकाचौंध चुभी
लेकर आड़ खुबसूरत परन्तु खोखली बातों की, दुहाई दी, फुसलाया और डराया भी
बनी रही जब हठी तनिक वह, ज़रा उसे बहलाया भी
चकित हुई दोहरे बर्ताव से, हताश हुई, दुःख की हुँकार उठी
चख लिया था स्वाद उसने स्वतंत्रता का, कुचले जाने पर फुंफकार उठी
अंत किया इस द्वंद का, की सिंहनी सी गर्जना
जन्म लिया विद्रोह ने, तोड़ दी ये वर्जना
बीत गयी रात अन्धकार की, ये सुनहरी प्रभा है
ना छिप सकेगी, न दबेगी, ये अदम्य प्रतिभा है...!



... और ये चोरनी मैंने 9 अगस्त को बनाई थी... कैसी है ?
Thanks a lot in advance ! The all appreciation I m getting here, I m just loving it...
keep smiling you all awesome ppl !
:)

37 comments:

  1. आपकी कविता मुझे बहुत पसंद आई...यही जोश बनाये रखें

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  2. बहुत sundar कविता है आपकी............. josh से bhari........... ऐसे ही likhti raho

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  3. सच! चुरा लिया हमारा दिल भी...बहुत सुन्दर कविता...बहुत बढ़िया ..!!

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  4. बहुत खूब! बहुत सुन्दर स्केच बनाया है। कविता भी अच्छी है। खूब लिखती रहो। रश्मिप्रभाजी सही कहती हैं-तुम बस एक करिश्मा हो!

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  5. बहुत अच्छा कार्य कर रही हो आशा करता हूँ कि तुम्हारे आने से, यहाँ (ब्लाग जगत ) कुछ नया मिलेगा !
    शुभकामनायें बच्चे !

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  6. ओ चोरनी,
    अपनी तस्वीर तो बहुत सुंदर बनाई है, साथ ही एक बात और कहनी है........म्म्म्म्म लिखा भी अच्छा है :)

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  7. सुंदर रचना.... वाह.. चोरनी भी अच्छी है..

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  8. kya baat hai,
    bahut achchhi kavitahai or chitr bhi bahut achchhe hai
    khas karke ruthi hui khopadi wala
    aasha hai aap apne saare sapne jarur pure karengi
    mai bahut prabhavit hua aapki life,aapki pratibha or aapki lekhni se
    best og luck

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  9. BHUT HI ACHHI KAVITA LIKHI HAI AAP NE
    YUN HI LIKHTI RAHE
    SAADAR
    PRAVEEN PATHIK

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  10. Hii Rashmi, You are really a nice Poetess & a Great Personality. I personally like reading Ur poems & writings.
    keep writing like this & be better day by day

    With lots of wishes

    Rishish

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  11. आखिर जम कर चमकी गगन में, नजरो में उसकी कौंध चुभी
    वो तो नहाई रोशनी में, औरों को उसकी चकाचौंध चुभी
    लेकर आड़ खुबसूरत परन्तु खोखली बातों की, दुहाई दी, फुसलाया और डराया भी
    वाह.....
    प्रिय रश्मि बिटिया
    आप की कविता के अलावा आपका पूरा ब्लाग देखा,इतनी प्रतिभावान हो,यह जानकर आश्चर्य के साथ अति सुखानभूति भी हुई,जिस देश मे
    ऎसी प्रतिभायें हो,उसका भविश्य तो स्वर्णिम होगा ही.मेरी बहुत बहुत
    शुभकामनायें

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  12. वाह भाई
    आपके बारे में जानकर बहुत खुशी हुई
    अच्छी कविता
    खूब पढिये और सफल होईये
    शुभकामनायें

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  13. रश्मि
    बहुत खूब बधाई

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  14. रश्मि,
    मतलब नन्हीं लेखिका जी,
    पहले बताइए, यह कविता किसकी लिखी हुई है?

    नाराज़ होने की बात नहीं है, अगर किसी और की है तो उसका नाम देना चाहिए।

    प्रतिभा रूचि के क्षेत्रों में किए गए प्रयासों, साधना से ही पैदा होती है।
    और अगर तुम्हारी है तो इससे बढ़िया तारीफ़ क्या हो सकती है।
    कि यह किसी परिपक्व लेखक की सी लगती है।

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  15. @समय : नहीं सर, नाराज होने की तो बात ही नहीं हैं, छोटी छोटी बातों को दिल से लगाने का काम तो कमज़ोर स्वाभिमान वाले लोग करते है. (और आप लोगों से नाराज़ होने की बिसात है क्या मेरी !... अविनाश वाचस्पति जी कहिन "लेखक पारिश्रमिक में कमी बर्दाश्त कर सकता है पर पाठको में नहीं..." )
    बल्कि आपका ये संशय साफ़ ज़ाहिर करता है कि मेरी कविता आप जैसे बड़े बड़े लेखको के बड़े बड़े लेखों के बीच पहचान कायम करने में सफल हो गयी है, धन्यवाद.
    लेकिन सर, ये कविता मैंने ही लिखी है और ये स्केच भी मैंने ही बनाया है... मेरे पापा के शब्दों में ... 'इतना बड़ा लांछन मत लगाइए !' (जब मैंने आपकी टिप्पणी उन्हें दिखाई तो उन्होंने कहा, हाहा !) और मेरी मम्मी के लफ्जों में 'ये तो बचपन से ही परिपक्व है!' :))
    आपकी टिप्पणियां सदा मेरा उत्साहवर्धन करती हैं.
    सभी इसी तरह मुझ पर आशीष और विश्वास बनाये रखे, मै हर बार आपकी उम्मीदों से अधिक कर दिखाउंगी और सदा आपको अचंभित करती रहूंगी.
    सादर.
    रश्मि.

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  16. अब लगा।
    ‘चख लिया था स्वाद उसने स्वतंत्रता का, कुचले जाने पर फुंफकार उठी’
    ..कि ये पांक्तियां तुम्हारी ही लिखी हुई है।

    समय इस कविता पर तुमसे बात करना चाहता था।
    सोचा कुछ कहने से पहले सुनिश्चित हो लूं।

    कहूंगा फिर कभी।

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  17. A Great Start of a beautiful journey!
    Bahoot Aage Jaaogi....
    Keep it up Rashmi!

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  18. नन्हीं लेखिका,
    तुम्हारा स्केच और उसकी अभिव्यक्ति पूर्णतया स्वाभाविक है.

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  19. thanx dear but remember me as a poetess not as an artist only. tumhari pratibha acchi lagi aur CHORNI bhi. God bless u.

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  20. hi
    keep it up
    and go ahead.......
    a bright future waiting for u

    take care your self
    &
    be happy forever
    :-)

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  21. nanhi nahi bahut badi lekhika hain aap
    har rachna bahut sundar hai . tasveet bahut pasand ayee ,
    Anaam

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  22. आपके बारे में जानकार थोडा आश्चर्य भी हुआ -- काफी उम्दा लिखती हैं आप. मीराबाई भी लगभग आप ही की उम्र में भक्ति और काव्य को समर्पित हुईं. भक्ति में समर्पित थीं तो उनमें दर्शन की गहराई स्वाभाविक झलकती है. आपमें अलबेलापन भी है जो अपनेआप समय के साथ साथ निखरता रहेगा. काव्य, दर्शन और अलबेलेपन में सही तारतम्य बनायें रखें तो आप भी एक दिन साकेत, कामायनी जैसी रचनाएँ कर सकेंगी. आपके उज्जवल भविष्य के लिए हमारी शुभकामनाएं.

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  23. बीत गयी रात अन्धकार की, ये सुनहरी प्रभा है
    ना छिप सकेगी, न दबेगी, ये अदम्य प्रतिभा है...!sach nanhi....ye panktiyaan tumhin par to laagoo hain.....sacchhi...mucchhi......!!!

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  24. abhi shuruaat hai bahut door jaana hai.

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  25. मुझे बहुत पसंद आई आपकी कविता
    सुंदर रचना...... सुंदर चोरनी
    बधाई
    ***********************
    Happy Birth Day RASHMI
    ***********************


    C.M. is waiting for the - 'चैम्पियन'
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  26. apki har kavita or painting bahut hi badhia hai , jiski jitni bhi tarif ki jaye kam hai.

    sach kahu to tarif karne ke liye sabd hi nhi hai , likhna hota hai so likh raha hu but ye sab likh kar kahi na kahi esa mehsus hota hai ki mano kahi ye sab likhte hue kisi baat ki avehlna to nhi ho rahi ya kisi or ki tarif karna to nhi buhl gaye.

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